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PostSubject: Kirigakure Student ((Itachi34 Resident))   Kirigakure Student ((Itachi34 Resident)) EmptyThu Aug 23, 2012 11:36 pm
Name: Heishi Kuruseida
Rank: Student
Village: Kirigakure
Age: 13
Level: 0

Primary Class: Taijutsu Specialist
Secondary Class: Ninjutsu Specialist

Statistics

Stat Points: (Starting Points, 50)

Health: 350
Physical Chakra: 320
Spiritual Chakra: 35

Toughness: 7
Wits: 7
Reflexes: 7
Speed: 14

Ninjutsu: 7
Fire: 0
Water: 4
Earth: 3
Lightning: 0
Wind: 0

Genjutsu: 0
Creativity: 0
Control: 0

Taijutsu: 32
Power: 11
Skill: 21

Traits

Trait Points: 10

Traits
-Name: Basic Training

Effect: Required to use an Udedorei, no ninjutsu or genjutsu techniques may be used while in armor, outside of systems.

TP: 10
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Techniques

Jutsu Points: 4

Ninjutsu
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Genjutsu
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Taijutsu
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Hybrid
-Name: Supīdo kyō

Skill: Udedorei

Rank: D-rank

Class: High Speed

Systems:Enhansa

Description: This armor was created by Heishi himself after discovering he was apart of the Nichidoku clan. Since he was barely even a novice at creating this armour it was hardly good quality and the systems in it didn't have much effect on him giving him only slightly more speed in attacks then before.

JP Cost: Free for D rank
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-Name: Enhansa

Skill: Taijutsu

Rank: D-Rank

Movements: 5

Power: 100

Effects: Increases taijutsu skill by 4 points and speed by 4 points.

Description: System created by Heishi for the custom armour he had made. This system slightly hones his skills in taijutsu and increases his speed both by 4 points.
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Background

History
- Heishi was born into the noble Nichidoku clan and had a suppression device given to him at the age of two just before his parents were sent to war just incase they were K.I.A. and evidently they were. Heishi was put into an orphanage since he had no guardians of any sorts and had no memory of ever being in the Nichidoku clan. He always wondered what the thing in his chest was but no one was able to answer that for him. he eventually ran away from the orphanage at the age of 9 just after he recently joined the academy and is now 13 living on his own in the streets of Kirigakure.


Last edited by Chibiusa Pinklady on Sat Aug 25, 2012 12:24 am; edited 4 times in total (Reason for editing : ok got it now)
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PostSubject: Re: Kirigakure Student ((Itachi34 Resident))   Kirigakure Student ((Itachi34 Resident)) EmptyThu Aug 23, 2012 11:54 pm
I cleaned up your post, however two big issues. First, you have 31 Stat Points unspent. Secondly, you have to make a profile for your system, using this format. Trry to be more specific than just "increases speed" as your armor does that anyways~



Name: (Name of System)

Skill: (Ninjutsu or Taijutsu only.)

Rank: (Cannot exceed the Rank of the armor.)

Movements: (Depends, see below)

Power: (As per normal)

Effects: (Any effects this system creates.)

Description: (What this system does.)
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PostSubject: Ok I fixed it   Kirigakure Student ((Itachi34 Resident)) EmptyFri Aug 24, 2012 11:32 pm
Ok so I fixed the system and spent the rest of the stat points should I should be set
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PostSubject: Re: Kirigakure Student ((Itachi34 Resident))   Kirigakure Student ((Itachi34 Resident)) EmptyFri Aug 24, 2012 11:41 pm
You still have 24 points to spend, you didn't place the points from your Primary and Secondary Classes yet.
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PostSubject: Oh   Kirigakure Student ((Itachi34 Resident)) EmptyFri Aug 24, 2012 11:57 pm
ok ya I didnt understand why you were saying I had 31 left so sorry i'll fix it real quick
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PostSubject: Re: Kirigakure Student ((Itachi34 Resident))   Kirigakure Student ((Itachi34 Resident)) EmptySat Aug 25, 2012 12:00 am
ok got it now
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PostSubject: Re: Kirigakure Student ((Itachi34 Resident))   Kirigakure Student ((Itachi34 Resident)) EmptySat Aug 25, 2012 12:25 am
Approved.
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