Kirigakure Shinobi (Avan Nightfire)

Name: Atasuke Akera
Rank: Student
Village: Kirigakure
Age: 13
Level: 0

Primary Class: Genjutsu Specialist
Stat Boost: +2 Toughness, 2 Wits, +2 Ninjutsu, +4 Genjutsu, +2 Taijutsu
Speed Bonus: +2 Movement per 15% difference, Max: 20
Special: May learn up to 1 Genjutsu-Hybrid techniques above current rank, in addition to the normal single technique above rank.

Movements: E-Rank: 2 (1) ║ D-Rank: 3 (1) ║ C-Rank: 4 (2) ║ B-Rank: 6 (3) ║ A-Rank: 7 (3) ║ S-Rank: 9 (4)

Handseals: E-Rank: 3 ║ D-Rank: 4 ║ C-Rank: 5 ║ B-Rank: 6 ║ A-Rank: 8 ║ S-Rank: 10

Secondary Class: Ninjutsu Master
Stat Boost: +4 Wits, +8 Ninjutsu
Speed Bonus: +1 Movement per 10% difference, Max: 10
Special: May learn up to 1 Ninjutsu above current rank, in addition to the normal single technique above rank. Chakra costs for Ninjutsu techniques is 50%.

Movements: E-Rank: 1 (0) ║ D-Rank: 2 (1) ║ C-Rank: 3 (1) ║ B-Rank: 4 (2) ║ A-Rank: 5 (2) ║ S-Rank: 6 (2)

Handseals: E-Rank: 4 ║ D-Rank: 6 ║ C-Rank: 8 ║ B-Rank: 10 ║ A-Rank: 12 ║ S-Rank: 15

Statistics

Stat Points: 50

Health: 600
Physical Chakra: 20
Spiritual Chakra: 170

Toughness:10(2)
Wits:4(6)
Reflexes:10
Speed:6

Ninjutsu:10(10)
Fire:0
Water:10
Earth:10
Lightning:0
Wind:0

Genjutsu:10(4)
Control:4
Creativity:10

Taijutsu:0(2)
Power:1
Skill:1

Traits

Trait Points: 20

Traits
-Trait Name: D-Rank
Prerequisites: N/A
Effect: Gains the D-rank classification, increasing movements and hand seals per movement.
TP: 5


Techniques

Jutsu Points: 4

Ninjutsu
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-Name: Suisei Boru
Skill: Ninjutsu, Element Water
Rank: D
Handseals/Movements:6/2
Power: 250
Effects: None
Description: Form's a ball of pressureized water as it fire's off in a straight path in front of the the user.
JP Cost:5

Genjutsu
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-Name:Akuamira
Skill: Genjutsu, Element Water
Rank: C
Handseals/Movements:12/3
Power: 0
Effects: Traps those who look into the mirrior into the genjutsu.
Max Duration: Equal to the user's Control in genjutsu up to a max of six turn's or till genjutsu is released.
Description: Create's a mirrior of water in front of the user causing anyone who would stare into the mirror and see there reflection to fall into the genjutsu. Upon looking into the mirrior the opponent would feel like there skin was melting.
JP Cost: 10

Taijutsu
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-None

Hybrid
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-Name: Akuaburedo Sakkaku
Skill: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu Element Water
Rank: C
Handseals/Movements:12/3
Power: 300
Effects: Fire's real and illusionary blade's of water. The illusionarry blade's do no damage.
Description: Fire's off two blade's of water at a high speed cappable of cutting human skin in which the illusionary blade strikes the opposite side of the opponent the real blade's attack. So if the illousionary blade strike's the opponent's left side the the real one attack's the right side. Of the two water blade's only one is real while the other is fake like an opticle illustion. For each time this skill is purchased you can either choose to create one extra illusionary water blade or another real water blade. If you have one or more real blade fired the must all strike the same side. Also when when purchasing this skill again you must declare before purchase which blade of water you want and this skill may only be purchased up to five time's.
JP Cost: 10

Background

History
-Atasuke grew up in the land of water raised by his mother and father Zera and Azumo who was part of a clan known as the Akera clan. The clan speacialized in earth and water styled jutsu and able to mix the two to make a plant style. By Mixing water style with earth style the user can grow plant life at will such as flower's, vine's, or bush's making a plant styled jutsu. There jutsu has made them world wide gardener's though atasuke could not yet do such style's, but would be he first to try and become a shinobi woundering off Into his journey to the village hidden in the mist.

Alright, I cleaned up your format a bit, but there are still some issues.

1)
-Kekkei Genkai Name: Shokubutsu
Description: This is a kekkei Genkai based trait passed down through the Akera family. By Mixing water style with earth style the user can grow plant life at will such as flower's, vine's, or bush's making a plant styled jutsu.
Drawback: Must have released the seal on the secound element.

This is not a kekei genkai, this is just an elemental release, one that you can't sue yet as you do not have the ability of both elements yet.



2) As a Student you can know water or earth ninjutsu, but not both.



3)
-Name: Akuadansu
Skill: Ninjutsu, Element Water
Rank: C
Handseals: 12
Power: 390
Effects: Combo: Full Opening: The opponent cannot evade or block the next technique in the combination, specified by this technique.
Description: Form's four blade's of highly pressurized water which is fired off in which ever direction the user chooses.
JP Cost: 10

You aren't a Taijutsu Master, so you cannot use the Combo version of Full Opening. You also have not specified what technique it Opens for.



4) You also only start with 1 D-Rank, and 1 Technique above whatever starting rank you end up being.

Ok I edited my sheet to fix the problem's. Sorry for the misunderstanding thought the specail part of the class's meant you get a ninjutsu plus another above or with the hybrid genjutsu one. you get one genjutsu hybrid and one above. Guess I was under standing that clear. As for Kekki genkai I have removed it and will wait till I have released my second element to add it as a element release if it is ok to then.

Yea, waiting is fine for that. And I was mistaken. As a Genjutsu Specialist you can receive one Hybrid Genjutsu technique as well, up to one rank above where you are.

Ok Thank's I added my genjutsu hybrid so if all is good with you then my character is done^^.